Nigel's Literacy group shared some ideas and came up with this Diamante poem about the Piwakawaka.
Piwakawaka
fluffy, tiny
flitter, flutter, swerve
brown feathers, black tail
Swooping, catching prey
pretty, wonderful
Fantail
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Hi Rawhiti School! I am Nishka from Yaldhurst Model School! I really like how you have made a very short and very lovely poem about a beautiful Fantail! Those birds are gorgeous! They are my favourite birds!
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part of the poem is the rhyme flitter, flutter, swerve. That was a excellent rhyme! What did you like about the poem? Please reply to me! Bye!
- Nishka